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A Winter Poem
#1

Nights are getting cold
The summer is done
You can see your breath
By the morning sun

The season builds
So cold and dark
The little leaves
Dead and stark

A snowflake
Coming down to freeze
Snow falling
Ice is covering the trees

The way it falls all over
Most days and nights
Looks like Christmas
Turn on all the lights

Cold wind blowing
Across the frozen lake
The river don’t sleep
And I’m wide awake

Out through the snow
You yelled in my ear
“It’s wintertime”
The start of another new year


Each of lines in the poem is a verse from a Hip song. See how many songs you can identify from the 28 lines.

Hint: One song is used twice for a total of 27 different songs.
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#2

Marcus1970 Wrote:Nights are getting cold fire in the hole
The summer is done
You can see your breath inch an hour
By the morning sun

The season builds the lonely end of the rink
So cold and dark scared
The little leaves leave
Dead and stark

A snowflake the lookahead
Coming down to freeze
Snow falling
Ice is covering the trees something on

The way it falls all over
Most days and nights
Looks like Christmas
Turn on all the lights coffee girl

Cold wind blowing lionized
Across the frozen lake morning moon
The river don’t sleep
And I’m wide awake long time running

Out through the snow
You yelled in my ear escape at the hand of the traveling man
“It’s wintertime”
The start of another new year little bones


Each of lines in the poem is a verse from a Hip song. See how many songs you can identify from the 28 lines.

Hint: One song is used twice for a total of 27 different songs.

A quick glance...I got a few...nice job!
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#3

I think i got them all
Nights are getting cold - fire in the hole
The summer is done - the drop off
You can see your breath - an inch an hour
By the morning sun - at transformation

The season builds - the lonely end of the rink
So cold and dark - scared
The little leaves - leave
Dead and stark - wheat kings

A snowflake - the lookahead
Coming down to freeze - butts wigglin
Snow falling - modern spirit
Ice is covering the trees - something on

The way it falls all over - now for plan a
Most days and nights - nautical disaster
Looks like Christmas - thompson girl
Turn on all the lights - coffee girl

Cold wind blowing - lionized
Across the frozen lake - lonley end of the rink
The river don’t sleep - another midnight
And I’m wide awake - long time running

Out through the snow - family band
You yelled in my ear - escape at the hand of the traveling man
“It’s wintertime” - fireworks
The start of another new year - little bones


Each of lines in the poem is a verse from a Hip song. See how many songs you can identify from the 28 lines.

Hint: One song is used twice for a total of 27 different songs.

Great poem!!!
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#4

They are all so obvious once you listed all of them Cudocat! Very Cool. Must've taken quite a while to make it Marcus.
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#5

Process of elimination if you have all the lyrics handy.
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#6

would be nice to hear a youtube mashup of your poem!
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#7

This is masterful — Mav and the boys should put this up at the site or on their Facebook page!
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#8

This is awesome, nicely done!
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