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Playing Guitar for 10 Months
restlesssoul
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10-24-2011, 11:56 PM
My First "Song"

give it a listen!

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11-15-2011, 09:00 AM
Hey Restless,

I've been playing and writing for 11 years. You have lots of good ideas, and I'm sure that in time you're going to be very good. Try incorporating more upward strokes with your plectorum. You tend to rely too much on the downstrokes. Also, your song isn't very structured. Try using a basic ABABC structure. It gives the listener a sense of resolution.

Good luck. Keep trucking.
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